Virago Mara: Log line segments Test: Phrase Bank Variations.

Scheherazade’s Paradigm:

Variations of Loglines. Trailer Concept Amalgam. Test reading.

Act II: The Unrelenting Terror of the Demagogue: Confronted by the Virago Mara.

Trailer Cast:

Two Narrators, with Zaydimar narrative overlay :

Voice style:

Zaydimar: [ application: dialogue for trailer- monologue]

Grand emcee*: main trailer log lines ( 7 test variation for a phrase bank ) Grand/ Majestic voice ( radio serial, noir, suspense thriller – nostalgic, dramatic voice) * Your previous read was perfect tone ( for logline test) [attached trimmed sample ]

Podcaster: slogans, trailer additional urban/ punk voice ( blog, podcast, commentator, news reporter voice)

* definitions: emcee:a master of ceremonies.verb perform the role of a master of ceremonies at (a public entertainment or a large social occasion).

Pronounciations:

Judikons: Jue ( as in dew)- dih ( as in bit) kons ( as in condo)

Seasingers: Sea ( as in emcee) – Sing ( as in Bing) ers ( as in furs)

Behead: Bee ( as in Tee) – Head ( as in red)

Virago-Mara:[(vr (as in fir) ·aa (as in blah) go (as in low)) Mar ( as in car )a (as in up) ]

Ral’Jun: Ral (‘Ral ‘as in ‘Pal‘) Jun ( -‘un‘ as in ‘racoon‘ : ‘joon‘)

chattal: Chat ( as in chatting) tal ( as in battle)

demagogue:/dem-uh-GAHG/

Paradigm:( Pear- uh – Dime)

Scheherazade: “ Shuh Hair Uh Zod ( shuhas in tunnel )

Application: Sequence of Log line tests: Testing overlay of narrative with logline variations, for a Phrasebank* – to develop visual novel trailers. Testing to see which work best as trailer, visual novel illustration captions:

* Works as both a large trailer, but not merely** a sequential narrative – per se:

** the final chosen lines, may remove monotonous repetition of phrases.

[Can be read as a characters: The tantalizing, cruel Suathra: Mocking the listener with tales of her villainy – like DC’s year of Villains, as though the Joker was talking.

Synopsis: “ Logline/Set-up for Zaydimar’s Quest origin: A tale of a survivor of trauma, who uses her strengths, and to champion the oppressed and leave the world a better place, than it treated her.”

Target Audience: PG-13.

Grand Emcee: Voice, an enthusiastic story teller, relating an exotic and bizarre fairy tale adventure, with a positive moral theme underlying the radio serial, suspense, noir presentation.

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Trailer Narrative:

Dialogue for Grand Emcee: Read, in Blue Font

Grand Emcee: “ Classic Arabian Nights: Turned on it’s head.”

Narrator B: “ In a fantasy world of Speculative fiction – ala Harlan Ellison: comes the raw, insightful, “ Scheherazade’s Paradigm”; (makes the conversation about) where bad ass women (tackle:) cut off the head (on. to) of dinosaurs in the room: sexism, gendercide – in regressive patriarchal anomalies.

Grand Emcee: “Virago-Mara “

2 words

[Vocal directions: said majestically, warmly. Like inviting someone, to share hot chocolate in a commercial ]

Narrator B: “Speculative fiction paen to Harlan Ellison: Raw,… provocative,…. “ Scheherazade’s Paradigm”; follow bad- ass women – who cut off the head of sexism, gendercide, in a regressive patriarchal anomaly. “

Podcaster: “ Scheherazade’s Paradigm”; Join bad- ass women * – who cut off the head of sexism, gendercide, in a regressive patriarchal anomaly : Classic Arabian Nights: Turned on it’s head.”

18 words

Zaydimar: “ I wasnt’ always the champion you see before you,..

before I became strong,

I was once, a girl, with dreams of wealth”

Grand Emcee: “Scheherazade’s Paradigm”

[vocal directions: 1^st word, premonition, for a mystery adventure. 2^nd word,.. enunciated each syllable: “ Ter -ror” ( 1 sec count first syllable, 2 sec last: legato. Like a halloween story intro, slightly menacing tone . Applications: dialogue trailer overlay – monologue ]

2 words: sub 4

7 Variations: of Segment of Chief Conflict of Scheherazade’s Paradigm Trailer: Reflecting 7 audience, eras ( 90’s, 80’s, 70’s, 60’s, 50’s, 40’s)*

* For a thorough representation of the noir style trailer, to the audience’s most likely to recognize the Scheherazade reference.

Scheherazade’s Paradigm:

Trailer ( First Draft – Read Test*)

To revise after listening – and eventually choose one to launch, then obtain Broadcast rights for the chosen lines.

Variation 1:

Adam West, 80’s Amalgam Style

Sound Effect Dialogue Test – diction; hyperbole

Trailer Conflict Bridge (Setup) Description:

25 wrds- 72 sub

Grand Emcee:(Variation1) “ Put your neck on the block. “

[ Vocal direction: a cold, forceful, but detached/icy tone; an affected tone throughout the interrogation – reflecting the putting on of a role: ie,. Like Christian Bale’s Batman – (but NOT as over the top, guttural, or conspicuous; just an ominous, slightly hissing, grim-reaper tone; still clearly Zaydimar, and a feminine voice, just a little bit grimmer) ]

Podcaster: “ Unless, the Virago Mara, take action. To stop Suathra’s Terror, ,…”

Grand Emcee:(Variation1) “Whok!”,…

[Vocal directions: Effort is made for the sound effect to sound slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. “Blammo”,… “Whack!”,.. “Thud!,.ect . A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle at a birthday amount of energy ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation1) “ the massacre, audible beyond courtyard walls, “

[Vocal directions: 1^stphrase: referring to a war zone,..news anchor tone. Sharp ‘s’ ( ess, : MaSS- Sa- cre: emphasize first two syllables) 2^ndphrase: enunciate slowly, like whispering, Sherlock Holmes, sneaking up on quarry

Application: view from exterior, moving, Cops style, toward the courtyard ]

Podcaster: “ ,.. before The Demagogue creates and army of umbreed,. From the hosts of the decapitated. “

Grand Emcee:(Variation1) “ Thunk!.”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

14 words: sub 18

Zaydimar: “After joining the sultan’s palace harem,

I thought I had arrived.”

Grand Emcee:(Variation1b) “ one woman,.. after another,.. dragged: “

[Vocal directions: like a radio serial, thrilling log line, Last word: ‘drag-ged’, cold, steely tone; ominous and foreboding. Like telling a halloween story ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation1b) “ kicking – and screaming,.. up the steps: “

[Vocal directions: Emphasis “ Kicking” ( indicating struggle, and drama) rising tone. 3^rd Word, emphasis ( exaggerate: Sc- reaaam- ing; syllable enunciation is stretched: ie ‘en-ti- er’ for entire. last phrase: mysterious, suspense build up – revealed in the next line. ]

Podcaster: “ Drones, that obey cuj Wikkoth – devourer. “

Grand Emcee:(Variation1b) “,..to face,.. her beheading “

[Vocal directions: like a radio serial, thrilling log line, Third Word: ‘her’ in an ominous and foreboding tone. Like telling a halloween story Fourth word: – pronounce: BEE– hed-ing ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation1b) “ Chop!”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

16 words: sub 34

Zaydimar: “But with unmerited luxury and fortune, – can come undeserved misery,…. and invisible shackles, ….. ”

Variation 2:

Roy Thomas, 80’s Amalgam style

Grand Emcee:(Variation2) “ each pretty head,,.. cut off: severed by the ,..Headsman’s blade.”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: : fashion ad. “pret -tee” ( staccato: not quite like Mick Jagger in song featuring that word)- almost, Wizard of Oz Witch of the West: “ My, . pri – tee!”. But tone, instead is, cheesy, 2^nd Phrase: percussive, “Cut! – Off!!, louder, stark, dramatic contrast. 3^rd Phrase: milder, whisper-like tone, but normal volume- menacing: ‘se- ver – d’ , like emphasis in a scary story, 4^th phrase: speaking of the object of the phrase, in an ominous and foreboding tone. Like telling a halloween story ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation2) “ Pok!”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

Podcaster: “ We will not let our sisters in the harem, be subjugated, any longer! “

Grand Emcee:(Variation2) “ Rolls – “

[Vocal directions: 1st Phrase: sounding surreal; sustain, Rolls ( storyteller sound effect emphasis: Ie,.. “ The boulder, rolls,.. : rolll-ling,, alll the waaayy, doowwn, , . the hill ]

“,.. end over end; “

[Vocal directions: rising tone, surreal, like describe a series of bizarre images. ]

“,..spattering blood -”

[Vocal directions: Overwhelmed, into a state, almost beyond shock; in to trauma. ]

“,.. relocated to a wicker basket: “

[Vocal directions: Like telling a confidante about the absurd series of events at work, and the unlikely outcome.]

* “ Next! “

[Vocal directions: said indifferently with derision and condescension; reflecting the tone of the haughty corrupt Judikons. a cold, forceful, but detached/icy tone; ]

Application: Scene trailer, from Zaydimar 1^st script monologue. – reflecting the putting on of an ominous, slightly hissing, grim-reaper tone; still clearly Zaydimar, and a feminine voice, just a little bit grimmer). ]

22 words: sub 57

Zaydimar:“the kind that keep a bird caged, , mute, even after the door is opened.

Fear,.. “

Podcaster: “ cowed citizens, watch the solemn procession, “

Zaydimar: “There was a time, I was weak, and looked to men for my strength, ..”

Variation 3:

Wes Craven, 70’s style Amalgam

Bridege line 2:

Zaydimar: “using my wiles, to gain advantage in the patriarchal society I was born,..”

Grand Emcee:(Variation3) “ ..gorgeous women,… led up the scaffold,… “

[Vocal directions: first phrase. “Cheesy’* with a tone like a fashion ad.

reminding the audience what is normally associated with women, to be juxtaposed with the draconian situation, of the harem girls in the Scheherazade’s Paradigm. 2^nd phrase: as though sadly, or down cast, .. a heavy sigh, and slower pace of speech; as though beat down. ]

“are forced,.. to put their necks,… on a chopping block,..”

[Vocal directions: 1st phrase: said as though incredulous, rising tone. 2^nd phrase: slow, deliberate, almost staccato, emphasis on ‘their’ – rising tone. Said louder: ‘necks’, 2 second enunciation ne- cks, 3^rd phrase: a steely tone, menacing, like a Halloween storyteller: slight pause after “on a” , enunciating CH , of chopping, 3 second duration for the full word: Chuh- op- ping, – each syllable crisp. Falling tone last word. ]

16 words: sub 73

Zaydimar: “To help my father’s farm, and my siblings live better lives,

I went away, from the life I knew, in exchange for dreams of wealth,..”

Grand Emcee:(Variation3) “Hack!”

[Vocal directions: Startling sound effect. ( ie,. “Bam” , from Adam West Batman) louder than speaking tone. Not quite shouting. Slightly surprising someone. Boo! ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation3) “- women, callously treated,.”

[Vocal directions: Speaking in a dry, steely tone of disapproval, and grim premonition, ]

… as chattal:,… Livestock – “

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: disapproval in the tone, at the enormity. Emphasis “ chat -tle” rising tone. Incredulity of comparison. Last phrase: “ accusatory, incriminating, outrage. ]

“,… unceremoniously,… decapitated,..”

[Vocal directions: tone, like shocked, or to invoke public ire. last word, each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis: dee- CAP -ih – tay -ted,.. with 3 second count between this phrase and next ]

Zaydimar: “ finding instead,I had traded all that was most precious,

for empty, glitter, and a life encased in a gilded cage, ..”

Grand Emcee:(Variation3b) “Chuk!

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation3b) “,…like Hens,… at the butcher’s block,,..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: disapproval in the tone, at the enormity. Emphasis “ Hens” rising tone. Incredulity of comparison. Last phrase: “ accusatory, incriminating, outrage. ]

16 words: sub 89

Zaydimar: ”no matter how much pain,..I was spared, from being served hand and foot, … I yearned to be competent, and for my life to have meaning – “

Grand Emcee:(Variation3b) “Thok!”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

“,.. their heads,.. cut off, ,…. disposed of. “

[Vocal directions: tone, like a news anchor, reporting something unpleasant, and the details making his mouth frown, and shake his head. ]

Zaydimar: “these were deprived, as a concubine to the fickle Caliph, …”

Grand Emcee:(Variation3b) “Wruk!!”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

8 words: sub 97

Podcaster: “ Unable to believe that the entire harem, many whom are sisters, and cousins, to the watching crowd, are threats to Public Safety, … the people long to see justice,.. “

Variation 4:

Lucio Fulci, Amalgam 60’s style – Read Test:

Zaydimar:” a toy, to be played with ,..”

[ said in rising tone of earlier script – mentioning Scheherazade – indicating, impersonation of lightness , and fickle interest of the carefree sultan ]

“,.., and forgotten, …”

Grand Emcee:(Variation4) “Formerly,.. sexy harem women,.. become,..”

[Vocal directions: deliberate, paced fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. Sustaining first syllable for emphasis, rising tone, louder, ( similar to ‘entire’: as ‘en-ti-er) ‘ se- x- ee…. (first syllable of, sexy, ‘eeh’ longer by one syllable:ie: se- ehx- eee : still the proper sounds of the word, just emphasized with longer duration on first syllable ) deliberate slower pace. “..Hare-um”.

Embracing the “Cheesy’* aspect of noir :

Last word: premonition for contrasting tone change in next line.

*definitions cheesy: (informal) too emotional or romantic, in a way that is embarrassing a cheesy love song a cheesy romance novel. ​(of a smile) done in an exaggerated and probably not sincere way She had a cheesy grin on her face.

Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

“,… headless,.. horrors. “

[Vocal directions: Shocked, Appalled, – reporting starkly grim, lower pitch: “Head-Less” a sec pause, “ Hor-Rors”. Volume increased, from previous line, stays level through both understated, percussive emphasis. “Head-luss” ! – “ Hor – rers” ! staccato. ]

“Shunk!”

[Vocal directions: Like whispering for someont to be quiet: Begins “Shhhh” ( 2 second enunciation. ) – Unk! ( rising louder ) slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

8 words: sub 105

Zaydimar: “ Yes, I might have continued, living as a shadow, in the palace,.. “

Podcaster: “ citizens morale sink,.. as Ral’jun’s freshest flowers- untimely wither;”

Grand Emcee:(Variation4) “Wok!”

[Vocal directions: A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle. Wooh- aa- CK!! ( rising, tone, louder volume- last CK!!) ]

Zaydimar: “entertainment for a man, who rarely called me,..

and didn’t remember my name, …”

Grand Emcee:(Variation4) “ ,.. the tinkling chains,..as each woman,..”

[Vocal directions: Phrase 1: soft, whisper tone, soothing, denouement to the former tension,

Phrase 2: storytelling build up to contrast, in next line ]

“,… lays her neck on the block,,…”

[Vocal directions: heavy with premonition, like speaking of a weighty and gloomy ordeal; softer tone, slower speech; gravitas, ]

“,…swiftly decapitated,”

[Vocal directions: tone, like shocked, or to invoke public ire. last word, each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis: dee- CAP -ih – TAy -ted,.. with 3 second count between this phrase and next ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation4) “Lop!”

[Vocal directions: A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; Slowly, ( Ell sound of ‘L ‘ – luuuuu ( 2 second sustain, crescendo) – LOP! ( loud, startling!!) ( like telling a story: “,.. when he came at me in the bar,… I punched him, in the jaw: BOP! ) ]

16 words: sub 121

Zaydimar: “My family spent the wealth, to improve the farm“

Variation 5:

Tim Burton, Ed Wood, Amalgam 1950’s Style,

[Pronounced: Bee-head-ded ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation5)“ Their freshly severed heads, filling baskets,,..”

[Vocal directions: Speaking in a dry, steely tone of disapproval, and grim premonition, . Emphasis “freshly’ ( rising tone). Emphasis ‘ filling’ ( rising tone) ]

“,.. as the women,… are beheaded,”

[Vocal directions: like a radio serial, thrilling log line, – pronounce: bee- hed-ded ]

Zaydimar: “ ,…and my siblings grew spoiled – “

Grand Emcee: (Variation5) “ ,.. a gruesome pile, ..”

[Vocal directions: describing something awful, to see. Wincing. Emphasis, GREW- some ]

Zaydimar: “ always bickering over the amount, not being fair between those I dispensed it – “

Grand Emcee:(Variation5b) “The heaping baskets,.. of the women’s,.. severed heads, “

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: emphasis ‘Heaping’, rising tone. 2^nd Phrase: disapproving tone, 3^rd: Phrase: news anchor, bearing grim news, stoically, ]

“,..are carted away,… before,… each dawn,..”

[Vocal directions: relating an exotic and bizarre fairy tale adventure, surreal. ]

• 27 words: sub 149

Zaydimar: “Their selfish entitlement,..”

Variation 6:

William Gaines, Wes Craven, Amalgam 1940’s Style,

Grand Emcee:(Variation6)

“ when another cart,, of women,,… are scheduled,,”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: like a news anchor, reporting sordid* politics, . word ‘another’ said extra pretentiously Last Phrase: in an ominous and foreboding tone. ]

“,… to get their,… beautiful heads,..”

[Vocal directions: deliberate pace, fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. Sustaining first syllable for emphasis, rising tone, louder, ( similar to ‘entire’: as ‘en-ti-er) ‘ beau-ti-ful”; “Cheesy’* ]

Zaydimar: ” Robbing me of the satisfaction of being the benefactor,.. of my beloved family,.. “

Grand Emcee:(Variation6) ‘,..chopped off. ‘

[Vocal directions: percussive, “Chop-ped! – Off!!, louder, stark, dramatic contrast. Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

14 words: sub 163

Podcaster: “Rise, – we must Fight, the Demagogue, with every bit of strength remaining. “

Podcaster: “ the demagogue’s brazen abuses of power – foment an atmosphere of terror – “

witnesses descend in humiliated resignation**.

Grand Emcee:(Variation6) “They are,…”

[Vocal directions: phrase rising tone, in surprise, horror, shock,..like a radio serial,.. ]

“ ,…brutally,.. decapitated, …”

[Vocal directions: tone, like shocked, or to invoke public ire. last word, each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis: dee- cap -ih – tay -ted,.. with 3 second count between this phrase and next ]

“,.. by the,.. Executioner’s scimitar,.. “

[Vocal directions: raising volume, as in storytelling, to emphasize scary thing,.. voice affecting a scaring tone: like “and under the bed, lurked,.. The boogey monster! -raarrrgh!!” ]

Zaydimar: “ a great blow, disheartening me,. “

Grand Emcee:(Variation6) “Whack!”

[Vocal directions: A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle. Whuuu- WACK!! ( 1 second duration first syllable crescendo) ( rising, tone, sudden louder volume second syllable- WACK!!) “,.. Up at bat,… , on the second swing, … I hit a homerun, … WHACK! )

]

Zaydimar: “Had it not been for Suathra, I may have remained in the Harem, my whole life – “

Grand Emcee:(Variation6b) “ – each pretty head – falling,..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: : fashion ad. “pret -tee” ( staccato: not quite like Mick Jagger in song featuring that word)- almost, Wizard of Oz Witch of the West: “ My, . pri – tee!”. But tone, instead is, cheesy, 2^nd Phrase: sounding surreal; sustain, Fall-ling ( storyteller sound effect emphasis: Ie,.. “ The lion fell off the side of the tree: fall-llling,, alll the waaayy, doowwn, , . dropping 10 feet, to land on safely on its feet ) ]

“,.. landing on the,.. head,.. “

[Vocal directions: rising tone, surreal, like describe a series of bizarre images. Overwhelmed, into a state, almost beyond shock; in to trauma. Like telling a confidante about the absurd series of events at work, and the unlikely outcome. ]

“,..cut off,.. “ moments before”

[Vocal directions: emphasis, like still shocked from the horror they just saw, haunted by what has already happened, and there seems to be no end in sight ]

21 words: sub 184

Zaydimar: “turning grey, without ever tasting the sweat of purpose,.. “

Denouement of Conflict: Disney style, variation A:

Podcaster:**” until Zaydimar – and 8 resourceful,,..courageous, heroines – unite.”

Zaydimar: “,…the astringent surmounting of doubt,… “

Variation 7:

Roy Thomas/ 90’s Amalgam Style:

Grand Emcee:(Variation7)“Ral’jun’s harem,: where,.. the sexiest ladies,,..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Three words: said majestically, warmly. Like inviting someone, to share hot chocolate in a commercial Last Phrase: deliberate, fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. Sustaining first syllable for emphasis, rising tone, louder, ( similar to ‘entire’: as ‘en-ti-er) ‘ se- x- ie – est…. (first syllable of, sexy, ‘eeh’ longer by one syllable:ie: se- ehxiest : still the proper sounds of the word, just emphasized with longer duration on first syllable ) deliberate slower pace. “..Lay-deess”.

Embracing the “Cheesy’* aspect of noir : *definitions cheesy: (informal) too emotional or romantic, in a way that is embarrassing a cheesy love song a cheesy romance novel. ​(of a smile) done in an exaggerated and probably not sincere way She had a cheesy grin on her face.

Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

“seek wealth –Becomes a nightmare,.. “

[Vocal directions: 1st Phrase: encouraging, crescendo, a fulfilling, and aspiring tone. Reporting a heartwarming good outcome. Genuinely touched by the import. Last phrase, like an anthemic, majestic speech 2^nd Phrase: heavy with premonition, like speaking of a weighty and gloomy ordeal; softer tone, slower speech; gravitas, ]

12 wrds: sub 196

Zaydimar: “to rise with honed effort, singularly defined by resistance

the flame of will, burning its brightest, “

[Pronounciation: Sea – sing -gers: ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation7b)“,.. informed, sea-sing-ers are amidst,..”

[Vocal directions: bright, rising tone, of adventure, at the mention of the heroines, amidst the terrifying backdrop. Like a newscaster, reading good news – beaming, despite neutral professionalism. ]

“….. The ‘entire’ ( emphasis ‘en ti -er’ ) harem is sentenced,.. to death,.”

[Vocal directions: like a news anchor, reporting sordid* politics. ‘entire’ said pretentiously – each syllable enunciated, dramatic emphasis, ie,.. the en’ti-ur (entire) test, done, in 25 minutes. ” ]

“.. by the chopping block. “

[Vocal directions: last phrase ominous, enunciating, Chop -ping block, for radio noir dramatic tension. Slight crescendo, falling tone, lower pitch, grim, intimidating- emphasis last two words : ie”,.. the football players were intimidated when they faced, the 7 ft 3 380lb man known as’ The Refrigerator!!‘” . ]

15 wrds: sub 212

Zaydimar: “ bitter, despondency – evaporated in the fire of striving,

tapping the reservoir of abundant fuel, to give my best “

Grand Emcee:(Variation7c)“,.. the lovely harem women,..”

[Vocal directions: deliberate, fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. Sustaining first syllable for emphasis, rising tone, louder, ( similar to ‘entire’: as ‘en-ti-er) ‘ Lo-ove- ly”; (one syllable of ‘oov’ longer ) deliberate slower pace. “hare- um”, “Cheesy’*

Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

[Pronounced: Bee- Head-ed ]

Grand Emcee:(Variation7c) “,.. are brought to be beheaded – “

[Vocal directions: like a radio serial, thrilling log line, – pronounce: bee- hed-ded ]

9 words: sub 220

Zaydimar: “,.. to champion a cause, improving the well being of all – “

Grand Emcee:(Variation8) “ Villagers groan,..”

[Vocal directions: Weary sounding, expressing, how the people react: “ Not again,..” to the unpleasant news, as the Demagogue’s latest transgression, goes unpunished; somehow, the thinly vieled deceptions, prevent accountability; but the people are wearied nonetheless. ]

Grand Emcee: (Variation8) “ . ..- dozens of women,… … are lined up daily,, …”

[Vocal directions: like a news anchor, reporting sordid* politics, . word ‘dozens’ said extra pretentiously – each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis, ie,.. my son was so well prepared, he got every question, on the en’ti-ur (entire) test, done, in 25 minutes. ” ]

Podcaster: “ Until the regressive patriarchal anomaly,,..”

Grand Emcee:(Variation8) “ to face,.. the chopping block,…”

[Vocal directions: 1st phrase, like a news anchor, bearing grim news, stoically, with an undertone of disapproval. ‘ 8 ‘ is emphasized – incredulity, ie,.. 19 cars had their hub cabs removed at the gym in just 1 hour. 2nd phrase: said slight crescendo, falling tone, lower pitch, grim, intimidating- emphasis last two words : ie”,.. the football players were intimidated when they faced, the 7 ft 3 380lb man known as’ The Refrigerator!!‘” . ]

Podcaster: “ is no longer a threat to our freedom, …”

Grand Emcee:(Variation8)“ and lose,..their heads,,..one woman at a time”

[Vocal directions: tone, like a news anchor, reporting something unpleasant, and the details making his mouth frown, and shake his head. 2 second count silence, audibly, sighing, ]

Podcaster: “ our happiness,,..”

Zaydimar: “ ,…their many praises, a song – reciprocating my gift

Had it not been for Suathra’s Terror,…“

Podcaster: “ and our ability to thrive doing whatever we so choose. “

Grand Emcee: “Chok!”

[Vocal directions: slightly louder than the speaking tone, and startling. Like a cartoon, or Adam West Batman: ie “Kapow!” ,. A percussive vocalization, take a full breath before; like blowing out a candle ]

26 words: sub 244

Podcaster: “ We are more than objects, we are human beings!”

Zaydimar: “,..there may have never been a Zaydimar: The Champion”

Podcaster: “,.. Resolve; to defy: the demagogue’s dystopian gendercide. “

Synopsis Logline Alternate A:

Grand Emcee: “ the Demagogue, orders, the,… sexy harem women,,..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: like a news anchor reporting something they are displeased with, but maintaining neutral professional tone. 2^nd Phrase: “Cheesy’*, deliberate, fashion ad,.. “se-xy.” enunciate each syllable, bright tone. To associate with the women. ‘ Hare -um, wo-men”; deliberate slower pace. Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. ]

“,.. to face,.. the chopping block,… “

[Vocal directions: 1st phrase, like a news anchor, bearing grim news, stoically, with an undertone of disapproval. ‘ 8 ‘ is emphasized – incredulity, ie,.. 19 cars had their hub cabs removed at the gym in just 1 hour. 2nd phrase: said slight crescendo, falling tone, lower pitch, grim, intimidating- emphasis last two words : ie”,.. the football players were intimidated when they faced, the 7 ft 3 380lb man known as’ The Refrigerator!!‘” . ]

[ Pronounced: Bee- Head-ing ]

Grand Emcee: “sentenced to death,.. by beheading,.. “

[Vocal directions: 1stPhrase: like a chilling, shocking report – said like a scary halloween story: “sen-tenced”,.. to Death!,…”. Ominous. 2^nd Phrase: radio serial, thrilling log line, – pronounce: bee- hed-ing ]

Grand Emcee: “ the summary executions,,.. and mass,… beheadings. “

[Vocal directions: tone, like a news anchor, reporting something unpleasant, and the details making his mouth frown, and shake his head. 2 second count silence, audibly, sighing, Crescendo, Emphasis: MA- ess ( as though a two syllable exaggeration : ie,.. as with ‘entire’ becoming ‘en – tie – er”, last word: sharply punctuated Bee- Head- Ings ( rising tone first syllable, – falling tone last syllable). ]

22 words: sub 267

Podcaster: “ Rescue – the harem girls. Punish, and Depose the Demagogue. “

Synopsis Logline Alternate B :

Grand Emcee: “,.. the harem girls,…

face,…”

[Vocal directions: 1st Phrase: deliberate, fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. To associate with the ‘ Hare -um, girls”; deliberate slower pace. Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

“,… brutal decapitations,,..”

[Vocal directions: tone, like shocked, or to invoke public ire. last word, each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis: dee- cap -ih – tay -tions,.. with 3 second count between this phrase and next ]

Grand Emcee: “put their necks on,…”

“,.. the chopping block..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: said with premonition, 2^nd Phrase: said slight crescendo, falling tone, lower pitch, grim, intimidating- emphasis last two words : ie”,.. the football players were intimidated when they faced, the 7 ft 3 380lb man known as’ The Refrigerator!!‘” . ]

, ,..and are,… gruesomely,… beheaded,..”

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: tone, like shocked, or to invoke public ire. Third word: ( emphasis, crescendo, first syllable slightly stretched, GReew- Some lee. Last word: each syllable enunciated, for dramatic emphasis: Bee- Hed- ded ( 2 and a half sec count duration) ]

Grand Emcee: “ ,..in daily public,.. executions,.. “

[Vocal directions: tone, like a news anchor, reporting something unpleasant, and the details making his mouth frown, and shake his head. 2 second count silence, audibly, sighing, between this phrase , and next ]

[Pronounced: jue- da – cons: Jue ( as in dew)- dih ( as in bit) kons ( as in condo) ]

Grand Emcee: “,.. Eight Heroines, defy corrupt Ju-di-kons. Rescuing,.. the gorgeous ladies- “

[Vocal directions: 1^st Phrase: story teller, resuming narrative of heroism, and brightness; reporting a positive development in the story. 2^nd phrase, a rousing charisma, encouraging others to not despair- despite how ridiculous, or oppressive the circumstance may seem outwardly at the moment. Last Phrase: “Cheesy’*deliberate, fashion ad,.. enunciate each syllable, bright tone. Sustaining first syllable for emphasis, rising tone, louder, ( similar to ‘entire’: as ‘en-ti-er) ‘ Gooor -geous”; (one syllable of ‘oor’ longer ) deliberate slower pace. “lay-dees”,..

Delineate between the civilized feminine tone and the following draconian paradigm. To contrast starkly with the following phrase. Radio serial, thrilling log line, ]

[Pronounced: Bee-Head-ings ]

Grand Emcee: “,…from their beheadings: restoring freedom. “

[Vocal directions: bright tone, majestically, about beloved heroes, and evoking interest in sci-fi fantasy premise. Attitude, like reading a chapter from the Chronicles of Narnia, or some classic: like the Star Wars episode opening words. ]

33 words: total 300

Podcaster: ”Restoring freedom and peace to Ral’Jun.

Long live the Virago-Mara! “

300 Grand Total