I. First draft story flow chart:
I. Intro page:
a. warning of the Shaman:
Governor of the border tribe:
Main menu page:
Tent of shaman.
I a. Day before Pmunte raid.
Shaman warns, and committee is held.
Committee talks of scouts: and the 20 bodies found.
* show scenes, and the captured 130, and the defiler ect,.
characters: click on for dialogue.
visit: cast, Dakoza, Selya : talks to the shaman: *
* tells the story of the Erydesis, and the priest-leaders. And the Blasphemers.
[ gga, playing volley ball, ect]
b. Catuda director, sends 4 interns.
c. nearby tribe rule Norghuk, votes for Shaman, rest scoff
II. Night before:
Shaman senses the umbreed.
4 interns: sense
II.b During night ( anticipation)
III. Pmunte raid.
Options as interns ( Jahon, Laydrith: swordplay, slaughter the pmunte)*
* options in pmunte battle.
Rylanda: warn others.
Stane: protect others
Selya: doing late chores, saves one parent
skipped, – parents killed
Selya, walked Dakoza, pet and fed: is informed, and saves both parents
VI. The pmunte have pillaged. Day after.
Assess missing people.
look at dead bodies.
Selya is distraught. Jahon options. Shaman options. Dakoza.
VI b. Meanwhile – see Pmunte captured. *
line of virgins, taken.
Umbreed, wikkoth, ceremony, of defiler,
the Jotugg mnemoth.
The Congo Jongo temple,
Kornelious, and the Eye of Mnemoth – seeing the Umbreed Lords: Jongo, and Thezrog. *
VII. nightly candle light vigil.
cleaning up after raid.
Fortifying the wall.
Committee speaks to Shaman
– demanding ( questioning how he knows: who he is?)
Shaman tells the story of the Erydesis, and the umbreed, and the corrupt jongo.
He is laughed at.
Then he takes a cauldron, and uses a staff, and shows them.
Norghuk is convinced, and mernuda, speak for him, and
castigate the committee for not heeading his warning, and leave to bring an army.
Shaman tells the interns Norghuk is leaving to get an army.
The interns speak of investigating the scouts.
IX. The interns prepare,hiring new helpers,
including the boy betrothed to Selya.
The Shaman gives them gifts.
Selya is given the amulets.
X. The shaman is invited. The group embarks on the journey ,