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Thermidor Script 2 Audio

Splice Segments

ETA Feb 27 2020: Delivered Feb 28*.

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Section 1

Intro: Setting: Sci Fi Premise: Witchfork/Witchfynder Narrative 40 sec

* [ deadline was 2:18am on Feb 27 ( which was confusing, as posted – for the actress, who assumed it meant Feb 28 at 2:18am ]

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Section 2

Women in Cart. Off with her head x 3. Aristocrat after Aristocrat beheaded,..

1,500 words: The longest, and most dense narrative. Words specific to lurid pre-code horror scenes, were almost every word ( after the intro section one: very specific in the last section). She read it, with gusto.

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Section 3

Drum roll, before each execution, Weighted, dripping with blood, executing prisoners all day, Off with her head,

Files were time consuming to trim – eventually, had to stop. Unlike, smaller audio files, the many segments she presented, were part of a large open file*, so they had repeats of the full audio, after each section’s recording.

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Section 4

fancily dressed women, french maids outfits, carted prisoners, Off with her head, crowd description

So, I trimmed those, just now- and listened to the tracks to see what I had already trimmed.

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Section 5

16 cabaret dancers, to be beheaded (x 3), Witchfork, sci fi premise plot

* like a giant template, with new content, overlapping the previous. Not sure why; but I told her I could edit with audacity and save her the trouble.

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Section 6

The executioner – standing by the guillotine; pulls the weighted blade up,..

( In the 4 days since, I’ve started kickstarter : still need to submit art – before they’ll review it. Began drawing on the easel regularly ( making some preliminary Zaydimar character designs.

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Section 7

recent head from the basket – bouffant, woman – head; holds up – for crowd: clothes,… of the dancers,

Inquired to Fastner and Larson, about a commission; related to the visual novel. Posted the 2nd logline, and posted positive reviews – it was touching to see, she put my review, first on the page, and featured the sample, for her customers; really classy.

Section 8

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Women line up, to scaffold, 3 waiting, executed, Plot, Gedmar

I set up my mic, and began recording soundtrack themes ( it will be something, I can develop regularly – and then edit later, and replay most presentable themes).

Section 9

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The following Sections are more detailed ( lurid pre- code horror) – she read it so composed; a real trooper. She has an audio book narrative style, for mostly SFW. So far, all the scripts I’ve had read, the actresses post on their sample pages, to show others – but this one hasn’t appeared yet. Nonetheless, she is a good sport. And seems mature enough to be able to stomach the heavy content.

Freshly severed head, tossed into cart with other heads,…

As intense as it may seem to listen, or read the script; how many more times, I have to, during it’s development: thus, following a strict regimen, of outdoor studio work, for sunlight, and vigorous exercise ( and proper nutrition and health)- and a diversity of references, tasks, and variety – are the key to not getting weary, burned out, or overloaded.

Section 10

Minimal social media, or recreation use of the computer; while developing the content – later, when I have products I can market, there will be time for social media. Learning how to juggle the tasks – in as much, as it is most efficient, and promotes further development of art, and excellence.

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Since Thermidor is edutainment/historical fiction; it still is PG-13 SFW. nonetheless, the narrative segments, following, are quite lurid; so much so, it sort of becomes surreal; like Clockwork Orange, Schindler’s list, Cloud Atlas, World War Z, Resident Evil or I am Legend.

cart, freshly severed, heads, eyes blink, look annoyed, off with her head,..

I don’t think I’ve heard this much quantity, duration and amount of detail; in the narrative – anywhere else.

Section 11

It is integrated into a plot, but much more ‘terror’ than the plot, in these sections. Plenty of narrative to use in any visual novel; envisioning a sort of slide show type presentation, full color; using historically informed backgrounds, and costumed characters, crowd; with series of sequences, depicting the scenes from the narration; clicking, to advance ; or choose to visit other locations, or characters to start animations.

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With voices from the individuals, and multiple voices simultaneously for the crowd ( and sound effects for as many aspects as possible). As well as musical themes, drum rolls; ect,. [ though sounding like a lot of tasks, it will be straightforward, and less time consuming to make the audio, than all the finished art.

Head, like billiard ball, looks pouty, feelings hurt, black haired, bouffant, cart moves

Section 12

I look forward to writing the 3rd Thermidor script: I have a rough outline, and plan for scripts 3, 4, 5 and 6 ( writing each would take about 3 days per script).

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Guillotine is beheading another woman from the dancing troupe; Off with her head; Cart of Heads, and headless bodies, one eye shut, Woman at the scaffold, lowered into bascule, 9 beheaded dancers in cart, mass grave, 5 bodies tossed, bodies are nude,..

Section 13

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Severed heads in Tussaud’s workshop, Heads in bags and baskets, museum assistants,
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